Decent track, a bit short for my taste but it had a good bump. Id consider revising it and making it a bit longer, possibly adding a hook and a bit more bass.
I am in no way trying to be mean or hurtful in this review, i have respect of all musicians and their music. Im simply giving my feedback and some constructive criticism. Keep doing what ya do!
It'd be a lot better if you switched up the beat, give it more base and change the flow slightly. Also its quite annoying having the whole "Welcome to a blah blah blah." every 50 seconds. One and done should be quite substantial.
Know this is not me trying to be mean or hurtful in ANY way, i respect any musician and their art. I am simply offering what i believe to be constructive criticism. Keep doing what ya do!
Thank you for the feedback. Sometimes I just run out of ideas and the project comes to a halt. On future tracks that I experiment with, I'll try my best to limit the vocal tag(s).
lovely....
u have a great voice... ur voice reminds me of my sister...this song brings tears to my eyes
nice
liked it alot..keep doin watcha do bro
dude ur the best
yo jp this is the bomb....never heard anything like it im looking for sum1 to do a track wit hit me up if ur interested keep doin whatcha do peace bruh
dewd ur the shit
woah man this is tha bomb
O_O this certainly takes a spot in my top 3
dude this is sick ive never heard anything like it ur a genius man keep doin whatcha do
Love it Man keep doin whatcha do
great i love it made me wanna go do a driveby in an abandoned neighborhood just so i could get busted n fined
I'm glad you like it but pleasssse do not go and do anything like that
.............they might trace it back to me
Thanks for the love!
fucking beast
u kno this was the 1st thing i listened too when i came on newgrounds and its still my fucking fav
Really? Man thats great, glad its still your fav :-)
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